hmmm...

I love the concept of the game, but the song just hurt my ears. It was too screechy. Other than that, good job!

Wow...

I actually kind of just fell in love with this song. A great, simple melody with happy and hopeful lyrics. The robot voice I think is perfect except for when there is an "s", then it sounds harsh. Otherwise, bravissimo.

This is EPIC!!!

In the beginning, I see sort of like a flashback to a plane crash/boat sinking and a bunch of commotion. Then at the moment it switches to the second half, the camera would pan back from a man's face and with a huge sweeping motion, pan around his body to view the island first then stop by looking at the sea at the very end.

This would be a sweet movie track, and its amazing for your first classical piece.

Very Sweet

for your first classical piece, this is amazing, and i am absolutely dying to here the second half. and you presented the feeling you wanted very well, so props, cause power and determination is hard to present.